I'm confused to say is this a true story or fiction?
Express and blatant expressions and exaggerating the story but the last feelings in the story broke my heart
What happened with the girl's scenery (the girls sobbing her heart out) the pony's leg broken and at such an unbelievable angle.)
That part really
It makes me discover strong feelings that I wrote and I really liked it and at the same time I feel sorry for the girl and the pony
I hope to be a good critic comment
Thank you,michelle for this story :)
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