The Dash: My Entry into Week 107 #Zapfic Writing Contest by @felt.buzz

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My Entry into Week 107 #Zapfic Writing Contest by @felt.buzz.

Prompt: Hunter



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The Dash

Peeking from behind the pantry door, cheeks full of food.

The mouse smelled the large orange cat.

It dashed across the floor with a clatter, so much space to cover.

Diving into the wall, it narrowly avoided the crashing paws of the hunter.

. . .


Thanks again for your time and attention!

@jackofcrows


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Thanks for sharing your entry :)

I am finding a graphic for mine before I post.

I was bored at work one day a few years ago and mspainted up that mouse. Finally a use for it!

I love this story. I see the mouse...👍

A great day to you. 💕

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The drawing is a great touch.

The first line and the last line are strong to paint the scene in the mind, good stuff!