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I got curious I barely blinked for a while
I dropped my jaws and my heart too on the pile
I just kissed the girl ,the girl with most beautiful smile
Her Incense is the mist of spring at the noon!!
She glows like stars so mischivous and bright !
You can feel her Colors even in black and white!!
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Beautiful. I really love the last line. It's a really powerful way to end your poem. Personally I love to use paradoxes and contradictory ideas in my poetry to describe something inexpressible, and feeling her colors even in black and white is a perfect example of what I mean. Well done! Keep writing! :)
coming from you it means a lot to me !! and i loved the fact how the poem's text appears to be like a home when i center aligned it !! (by the way it was from your poems i knew that we can center align our text too) :D
Oh, I haven't notice that, but yes! That looks very cool! Hehe, I learned about the fact that this is possible a while ago, but only recently learned how. It's a great trick to know for better formatting.
someone should write a post about that !! would be much easier for people if they know how to fomat your blog
There definitely are a few, however, they tend to get lost in the plethora of posts coming in daily on this website.
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Great poem, :]
And that SMILE is really heart and jaw dropping.
I am waiting till she sees your comment !! :D thankyou @rouguebot
the excitement and thrill of a first kiss comes through nicely in your poem - I particularly like "Her Incense is the mist of spring"... that is lovely. Thanks for sharing :)
thanx for giving it your time !! well maybe now i can send her this poem !! needed a bit of approval :D
nice post @chapterclosed.please follow and vote me friend.every times I with you.
thank you
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Very beautiful!
thanx and sorry i made you to come to my blog !! :)
Well, I like smelling sexy people and kiss gorgeous lips! :)
thats the only reason why humans were born !! dont know why people call me pervert when i do that to a total stranger :D
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Loads of information. Thanks. Love it. @chapterclosed Followed