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RE: Beffie and her Red Scarf (5 minute freewrite)

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

Always a delight to see another freewrite pop up within seconds of writing ones own! This is... So delightful... but that last line... So ominous. Please don't die trying to pay for your child's euphoria. Your child would rather you live. Probably. I hope so.

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Thanks for the feedback. It was my first freewrite - and it felt good. I think I will keep trying.