Correct. It's an assessment of your essay. I believe if you submitted as a class assignment, it might get a passing grade in middle school or so. It contains very weak reasoning and is obviously lazily researched - you just threw in links that just kinda sorta support your core argument (which i surmise to be "vegetarians are stupid"), without even understanding what they were about.
Of course, all these high-fives from folks saying in so many words "yeah, vegetarians ARE stupid!" have likely clouded your ability to see the lack of quality in your work.