Correct. It's an assessment of your essay. I believe if you submitted as a class assignment, it might get a passing grade in middle school or so. It contains very weak reasoning and is obviously lazily researched - you just threw in links that just kinda sorta support your core argument (which i surmise to be "vegetarians are stupid"), without even understanding what they were about.
Of course, all these high-fives from folks saying in so many words "yeah, vegetarians ARE stupid!" have likely clouded your ability to see the lack of quality in your work.
Correct. It's an assessment of your essay. I believe if you submitted as a class assignment, it might get a passing grade in middle school or so. It contains very weak reasoning and is obviously lazily researched - you just threw in links that just kinda sorta support your core argument (which i surmise to be "vegetarians are stupid"), without even understanding what they were about.
Of course, all these high-fives from folks saying in so many words "yeah, vegetarians ARE stupid!" have likely clouded your ability to see the lack of quality in your work.