Hello @winanda,
Glad to see you back here for week 10, I loved how you gave your all for this entry, you sang with passion and no fear, which is extremely important. The chorus was clearly your favorite part and you really felt the music. Where you can improve on, since you asked for constructive criticism and feedback, is breath control, vocal control, and really hitting those notes in the melodies throughout the song as close to the original as possible, once you do that, you will get a feel for the music to be able to add more of a creative artistic approach of your own style to it. But your energy and vibe is wonderful, so happy and contagious, if only everyone else would have that same enthusiasm for their entries, you are truly have fun and that brings me joy, keep practicing and singing and you will definitely improve. Solid fun entry
-@Verbal-D Official Vibes Judge
Thanks so much for leaving this wonderful comment and constructive criticism, it means so much to me.
You got it right, the chorus was my favorite part. I will work on the areas you pointed out and keep up with the weekly competition for a better improvement.
I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the vibes in my performance.
You are so welcome, I am glad to help out where I can. I am looking forward to your future entry to see you grow and get better and enjoy your vibes and great fun musical energy
I sincerely appreciate your time and interest in my growth. Looking forward to much growth as weeks go by.