Thanks so much for leaving this wonderful comment and constructive criticism, it means so much to me.
You got it right, the chorus was my favorite part. I will work on the areas you pointed out and keep up with the weekly competition for a better improvement.
I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the vibes in my performance.
You are so welcome, I am glad to help out where I can. I am looking forward to your future entry to see you grow and get better and enjoy your vibes and great fun musical energy
I sincerely appreciate your time and interest in my growth. Looking forward to much growth as weeks go by.