Drowned.

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The climb to Lovers’ Leap was steep for the star-crossed couple, their union forbidden by feuding clans. At the cliff’s edge they laid some of their clothing, the sea raging below. Then hand in hand, they jumped—straight onto the tandem bicycle they’d hidden earlier and pedalled off into the sunset.

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Posted in response to @feltbuzz's Zapfic 50 Friday contest

The prompt is steep
The image is my own.

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Ha Ha Ha. This needs to be filmed :))

😄😆 I'd have an entry in the Guinness Book of Records for the shortest film pitch in cinema history.

Ah, a happy ending. And an image I can't unsee of a naked couple riding a bicycle. I know you said 'some' clothing but I imagined that was just hats.

😆 I originally wrote their clothing but I bloody well knew someone would picture them naked so I had to somehow fit in the two words some of. Dammit! Hours of my life...wasted!

It's always going to be me picking up on stupid things. Sorry.

I forgive you:)

I love them both.

😆 So do I! Hopefully they won't be arrested for being naked in charge of a bicycle.

They will evade capture and live the good life from here on out.

Oh, you little romantic you!

15 minutes later they were rowing about who was doing all the pedaling

That's an awfully cheerful ending. Did you win the lottery or something?

You cheeky pup! Are you insinuating that I possess a gloomy disposition? I, who has spent my life spreading sweetness and light whene'er I go?

...no?

😆 Hmm, well that's ok then. I would say 'my mistake', but I don't make mistakes!

Posing a question is never a mistake, but generally the correct course of action!

Thaaazzzz Right...

Dee Dubbya Ride On.!!

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Yer a gas man!:)

Lol arrest the indecents!

Please note that there is no nudity in this story, either implicit or implied!:)

If they were in underwear still indecent 🤣