The Sorrowed Mind πŸ™‡β€β™‚οΈπŸ’”πŸ˜”

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The depth of my heart cannot be expressed in words

But with an appropriate picture a clear view or even words might emerge

As I walk in the path of shadows of sorrow and death

The evils I fear are almost upon me

Covered in the cloak of heartbreak and disappointments

I walk in shame in a path I have once thread

With confidence joy and strength I moved in those days

But with a sorrowed mind and thoughts of hades

I currently roam the streets above hell

I feel like I’m in hell

I hope again for the white lovely days

With hopes and joy even in the dark and shadowy days

My wishes are lovely but my reality is hurting

** End**

I see a man filled with shame and sorrow as he walks through the streets. The pictures speaks more about his state of mind which he couldn’t share with anyone. He covers his head in a black cloak hoping he would be left alone and unseen by all.

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What an emotional poem! You capture the vulnerabilities of a heart who has been through heartbreak and disappointment but is determined to move past and hoping for brighter days. But first, they must lose that cloak and move out of the dark shadows into the light! Very well-written!
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Wow.. thank you so much for your excellent review and contribution. I'm glad you got the gist. Thanks again.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉ I really appreciate the gift..πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Can it be others make him feel ashamed for example because he's a leper?

That's a good example.. πŸ‘ Thanks for your comment.πŸ™πŸ™‚

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