Bound to Be

in Blockchain Poets4 years ago

Bound to be
A being bound
Bindings are:

Across shadows held down
Struggling against sunlight
Tied to the nascent form

Not bound to be anything
Yet still bound
To a monolith

It rolls and rolls
Dragging my limp form
Across jagged stones

Cries and agony
Until a strand
Slit and splits

No longer bound
Merely bound to
Be insignificant.

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It rolls and rolls
Dragging my limp form
Across jagged stones

Cries and agony
Until a strand
Slit and splits

The role of slit and splits is too harshly used. By the way, harsh is a compliment here. I could literally feel the situation. At first, I was lost but soon I grasped it and it was scary. Good, write-up.

It rolls and rolls
Dragging my limp form
Across jagged stones

This was my favorite stanza.

Enjoyed this poem. I would describe it as an embodiment of the word "malaise". You can just feel the gray, stagnant tension of mediocrity.