One sip of you and I'm free.
It's time to burn this poetry
and flee this chaos of mind.
With you, I'll never look behind.
I'm kindly plotting a vacation.
You decide the destination.
Where we end up will suffice.
To stay here wouldn't be too wise.
Our place is somewhere out there.
I love this girl; Can't live without her.
Your imagination and description of an imaginary figure is amazing.Every line correlate with the next.
Simple and precise
Nice write up
Thank you, sincerely! But the figure I speak of is not imaginary - It is my love.
Kind regards!
Beautiful poem I loved it, very nice, I hope I too can fall in love soon to write things like that, great writing ☺
It will happen! I'm sure of it - Let time ripen your heart and remain receptive.
Many thanks.
This flows really well, nicely done @lukakorba xx
¡Muchas gracias!
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