I'm glad to know that the idea I had in my head and with the idea that I was molding the character can be perceived, it's really nice to read the compressions of something created. I really appreciate that you have read my story, I will be sharing as often as I can since it is a community that also serves as a guide and support for writers.
And you are right, I really like to write, since I was 14 years old. I didn't know I had a particular flow though, I hope to improve it. <3