The Ink Well Prompt #80 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

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Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

Time for the prize announcement and new challenge!

Last week's prompt was sinkhole and the skill target was to add action to your story. This community really came through with many amazing stories!

Writers came up with some very original ideas in response to 'sinkhole'. Our selections of this week's winners and honorable mentions reflect how well writers dealt with this prompt and skill challenge.

Update! We are excited to share that in addition to our first place winner, we are awarding a second and third place, in addition to a few honorable mentions. For second and third place we are awarding Hive Basic Income (HBI). The third place winner receives 2 HBI and the second place winner receives 3 HBI.

Here are this week's honorable mentions, all of them written in response to the prompt and skill challenge.

Honorable Mentions

One thing she forgot was that Amelia Evans was a tough nut to crack and got that trait from her. At exactly eleven at night, I snuck out of my room using the tree by the window side. I climbed the nearest branch, holding tight until I swung my legs across and eventually jumped down from the tree. Running across the yard with my friends, we decided to walk through the bush path instead of the sidewalks to avoid being easily noticed. We could hear the sounds of scrunched leaves under our feet as we made our way through the path.

Unknown to the presenter and his guest, the programme was being monitored by agents of the government. Before rounding up the programme, the station was surrounded by gun weilding security personnel.
They arrested John immediately and whisked him away. Few minutes later, the presenter was summoned by the State security services.

Patting the wrinkling hands that almost matched hers, Margret’s mother only nodded her furrowed face to the sadness out pour of her sister in-law. “Anthony told me the doctors couldn’t have done anything to save him in that very critical stage his aliment was. He pleaded with me as his last wishes, not to show an iota of sympathy towards him during his last days”, Anne explained.

They started rappelling down. Due to its age and being untouched, the soil in the sinkhole was hard enough not to crumble or erode. Nonetheless, the two were still cautious with their movement.
Over 100 feet below, they reached the end of their rope. This caused them to swing around in the air and disturb the wall of soil around them. Loose rocks and soil started to fall below.

Not one to miss any opportunities, he slid into a sinkhole and splashed dirty water on him. Joe was about to go down and pretentiously apologize when he thought "Naah, the rich don't go to the poor".

Third Place: Wins 2 HBI

Into the void disappeared the kiss. She could taste salt and beer in his mouth. That emptied into the darkness too, which also went ahead and swallowed the children. It dissolved the birds that scratched the gutters as they landed. It consumed the minutes of confusion she felt when he said he loved her and she was assessing what that meant. It gulped down the books she had read. She felt her sentences leave her one by one, each tugged from her until she bled, and then the sinkhole took her blood too.

Second Place: Wins 3 HBI

One night a terrible storm lashed the island in such a way that it seemed to rock a small piece of clay inside a large container of water. The waves pounded with great force and the wind swept away everything that was not firmly held to the surface. Between lightning and thunder, the roof of the fisherman's house practically blew off, but this ingenious man found a way to keep his family safe throughout the night. The hours went on forever until the storm finally dissipated. Already exhausted from the hard work, the early morning announced it was time to go fishing, but this man simply succumbed to fatigue and sleep as he lay back in his chair for a few seconds.

And the winner of the sinkhole/action challenge is...@gabmr with the story Gyl's First Book. Congratulations, @gabmr. You will receive 5 Hive!

As if they had detected my great fear, the fountain pens that until recently were floating randomly, began to chase me. I don't know if I ran like Bucephalus or like a chicken, but I tried not to let my weak body get any ribs on my butt

Okay, let's review fiction entries from last week's prompt and launch a new one.

Stories From the Previous Week

@wrestlingdesires
@kei2
@bettyhandayani
@chincoculbert
@yuki-nee
@popurri
@buezor
@diikaan
@madamnaomi
@abigail04
@offia66
@merit.ahama
@fibre1
@creepymeow
@lordtimoty
@ezegburugburu
@farahikram
@dennmarc
@mjvdc
@gabmr
@melara.create
@temileke
@cool08
@khaleesii
@george-dee
@kirlos
@lightpen
@famous1
@gi-de-on
@jane1289
@fantom22
@mrenglish
@riverflows
@pipavan
@mcaspectacular

Thank you to everyone who posted a story for last week's prompt!

This Week’s Prompt

The Ink Well is fortunate to have many members who are eager to write. However, the curation team does not have infinite resources. In order to be fair to all writers, we have decided to ask our members to publish only one story per week. If members choose to publish more than that, they may. However, only one story will be curated.

It would be wise to use talent on the best story you can write so you can receive the optimal curation. Remember, Quality over Quantity. Moving forward the Ink Well Team believes this will provide a better experience for writers and curators.

At last, the prompt of the week!
This week's prompt is exhaust. Exhaust can represent an emission, as shown in the feature picture on this post. It can also represent a person's emotional or physical state. Or, it can signify that something is depleted, used up. What will the prompt word represent in your story? The word will help you to demonstrate a general principle of fiction writing: show don't tell. Inkwell Administrator @jayna discusses this well-acknowledged principle in her essay, Is Show, Don't Tell a Writing Rule?

An excerpt from that essay:

Writing is so much more powerful when it’s rich and descriptive. And beauty is in the eye of the beholder. What do I mean by that? Well, if I tell you a child is “lovely,” it’s just a word. What does that really mean? Does she have golden curls? A dimple on each cheek? Does she look up at you with eyes that sparkle like the sea on a bright day?

To show means to provide those details that help us to see Emily for ourselves, and to believe that she is, in fact, a lovely child. We don’t just have to take it on faith because the author of the story said so.

Read @jayna's essay in its entirety to get a better idea of the show, don't tell principle.

Here are a few examples ways you can use the prompt in your stories, and use the principle, show, don't tell. Of course, we hope you will be entirely original and surprise us.

Belinda's cheeks were beet red as she struggled to balance the chair on her back. She had been carting furniture all day and was exhausted.

Jonathan Smythe's brow furrowed as he studied the figures in his bank book. He sighed deeply. Would a trip to the Caribbean exhaust the family's savings?

A dark cloud hung over the village of St. Olaf. There was no rain in the forecast, just the interminable exhaust spewing from the tire factory's smokestack.

A week from now, we will select a winning story that demonstrates this skill and utilizes the prompt. Of course we will also be looking for overall quality in the winning story. Good luck!

Note: As always, please avoid violent, gory, bloody, brutal, sexist or racist themes and language, erotica and other NSFW (not safe for work) content, and stories featuring abuse of women, children or animals. (We have a complete article about The Ink Well stance on violence and brutality for more information.)

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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@jayna, @agmoore, @gracielaacevedo and @yaziris

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Hello, everyone! This is my entry for this week: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@idlemind/side-hustle
The title is "Last Wish". I wasn't able to change the title prior to posting that's why the link says, "Side Hustle"

I have given comments to the stories of @stellageorge and @fantom22.
Thank you in advance for reading.

Exhaust is a nice topic and a topic of gyration.

Wow.... I'm so happy to been part of the honorary mentioned....

Thank you very much for this wonderful surprise @theinkwell 🥳🥳🥳🥳 congratulations to @gabmr @riverflows @lightpen @blackalbino1 @viceroyklayd @diikaan and to all those who participated and gave the best with their good publications 👏👏👏👏

Congratulations!

Thank you. Congratulations to you

Thank you and well done!

Cool a writing challenge! OwO
May I also participate in this?

Your stories are suitable here madam hehe.. Check the monthly challenge.. The prompt is "wild"

I had to check the guidelines first UwU
I had to warm up my writing skills sa read. Next I'll work on the weekly entry first ☺️

Please do join us. You can learn about our rules and guiding principles if you read our Manifesto. We encourage all writers of short stories.

Congratulations to the honorable mentions @cool08 @lightpen @blackalbino1 and others, also hearty congratulations to the winners @gabmr @riverflows and @cajiro.
A big thanks to the team @theinkwell.

Thank you @fantom22. You are a valued member of the community.

@theinkwell Wow you called me a valued member, it means a lot to me, a few months back I had absolutely no knowledge of writing stories.
But I have got to this point only by taking advantage of the extensive knowledge of admins, the knowledgeable and experienced team members of this community.
These words are more than any praise for me, thank you from the heart.

Thanks. I'm so happy to have being part once again..

Thank youu😁

Thanks. much love ❤

Thank you. It's all the doings of theinkwell...

You're welcome. :)

Thank you dear

You're welcome. :)

Grats to all the winners, especially to you @gabmr 😊

Hey, thanks😁

First time of being mentioned. Thank you @theinkwell. My heartily congratulations to the other writers mentioned and the winners.

Yay, finally placed.. what a thrill. Congrats on the winners, I missed a few... Will read over a morning cuppa!

I'll be lurking...👀

Congratulations to all the honourable mentions and the winners. It's another week, let's take the bull by its horn.

Thank you for having me among the winners. I'm so grateful for it. Congratulations to all of you that did a great job!

🥳Congratulations to the winner, runners up and honorable mentions!

I posted my entry before this post was uploaded, but my story wasn’t added to the list of stories from the previous week.

The prompt post is written by a human, not a computer. It takes time to compose the post, with all the elements included. If you post your entry late on the last day, you are running the risk of being left off. We are a small team of curators who read the stories. Just humans, not computers.

Oh, ok. I’ll try to post my entry early next time. Thank you.

Here is my entry for the 80th prompt.

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@mrenglish/brick-wall-the-ink-well

I have engaged on the story of:
@kei2 and @wrestlingdesires.

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@samsmith1971/the-girl-in-the-mirror
Supported @kei2 and @creepymeow
I will be reading more stories in the next few days.

Yay. I'll make it to join 💕💕💕

!PIZZA fabulous!

Congratulations @gabmr! Thanks to the @theinkwell team for doing a great job. 😁 !PIZZA

Thank you😁

Welcome. 😊

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Thank you so much. Congrats to others!

Congratulations @gabmr . To all those mentioned, a big congrats to you all @fantom22 @cool08
@wrestlingdesire @kei2 @bettyhandayani @popurri @buezor

@marynn any way thanks for your congratulation, but for your kind information, my name is not on the mentioned list.

Thanks✌️

thanks for the challenge and here's my entry for this week

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@pjpavan/from-darkness-to-light-the

Hi friends!

This is my participation:

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@mjvdc/the-day-leslie-said-no

Today I supported the publications of @samsmith1971, @george-dee and @fantom22.

My post entry for the 80th prompt
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@marynn/the-king-s-reign-the
I engaged on the story of @gi-de-on @george-dee and @mjvdc

Thanks inkwell community for my first honorary mention. Means a lot 😭

And congratulations to other authors too ❤

Hello everyone,

My entry for the prompt: https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@janaveda/exhausted

Best wishes to all, and lots of fun reading and writing.

Congratulations to the winner, I hope to make the list someday.

Here is my entry for this week prompt
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@george-dee/the-inkwell-prompt-80-the

I supported @gi-de-on and @balikis95

Congratulations to all those mentioned for their great publications. Here is my entry for this week

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@jemima1996/no-time-to-be-exhausted

Congratulations to all the winners, here's my entry:
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@offia66/an-unusual-day-at-work
Supported @jemima1996 and @stellageorge

Hello everyone, my entry to this week; https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@khaleesii/the-wanderer

Thank you.

Also, I have engaged with other authors.

Hello The Ink Well;

This week I popped along to iyimoga's post and put the wondering to them about the need to deliberate craft language in a story. Then, immediately, I found idelmind's post - which was the complete opposite, marvelously crafted. An interesting reading experience going from extreme to the other. But I guess that's something that you would be seeing a lot.

This week, I'm not going to make it easy for you, 'Exhaust', eh? Let's try it:
https://peakd.com/@lordtimoty/the-reader-became-exhausted-or-would-they-become-exhausted

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