This looked to me like Indiana Jones battle...when he got stuck in that castle where they ate snakes...At least Your way of retelling the momentum sounds like it...I could even hear the sounds of those ladies, very clearly...😲...And that vagina wooden something is culmination in Boom Indy Jones adventure, when they put Indiana in those metal grates and down him in deep hole, with volcanic lava...😫
No bad thing to remind you of an Indiana Jones scene, is only every day was like an Indiana Jones movie life would be quite exciting!
Yes, you are right but You have that talent / dharma to turn everyday situation in exciting story...Each one can be turned into screenplay...When the reader reads it, he can clearly see some movie...Of course, each of us see differently and what our mind wants to see...
@tatjanastan you are absoloutely right, he has the real talent.
I do my best, than you though, it's a lovely compliment!