Best Lover And Best Friend! Part # 3

in #story6 years ago

Part 3 : New Twist In the Love Story!

  • On The first day Anila was searching for the Evidence against Amir. But wherever she try to catch him while have cigarette she was going to make video of him .She was not liking Amir So To Get Rid Of Amir she was always going to complain against Amir to Her Boss Kami.

  • As Kami was also in love with her He was taking advantage Of their Fight and Arguments on Daily Base, Because Kami knows that Amir love Anila As well And if They Do not Fight each other Amir will make her happy one day and she will love him as Well And Kami will Loss her forever which Kami never ever want to accept. He has shared everything in his life with Amir In childhood But Now he want to give up And want her Only For himself.

  • One night Amir went to a club and was followed by anila as she wants an evidence to proof him person to their fellows in their company. There were. Girl working in the company she was in love with Amir. As Anila said to that girl that amir was in a dancing club she thought that Anila is sick and she has some problem . Maybe she dreamed it. Sadly Anila was right and Amir was the one who was allowing Anila to see his reality. Amir was always allowing her to see the real face of Amir. That he is not a perfect man he is a simple man. And want to enjoy the life with his style. Anila was sick of him that he is not leaving any evidence that prove Him a bad person.

  • Whenever she was annoyed by Amir she went to the boss office Means to Kami Amirs friend. And kami was in love with her so he was always taking advantage of this misunderstanding of their fight. Kami want her in his life forever. But for that he needs anila to love him as well. There was a plan in Kami mind that he will make a plan to get sympathy of Anila and bring hate for Amir in Anilas heart. Once she start Hating Amir she will get her sympathy and she will start loving him .

  • As kami knows that Amir love him to heaven still he try to cheat him.

  • Kami had an accident on the road at night time while going back to the him from office. And someone took him to hospital. When Anila knows that Kami had accident she ran to the hospital to know that how is he.

  • Why Kami was expecting that Anila will believe that Amit did this accident .because when Amir was asking that why you don't love me she was trying to get rid of him and she just didn’t find any reason to reject Amit she just lie that She love Kami. Because she knows that Amir is a crazy person. If i say someone else name he will definitely kill him. But if she say that she love kami he will not harm him because Kami is his everything and Amir love kami to heaven. That way she will be safe and kami will be safe.

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Quite interesting @storywriter, but your composition is quite difficult to grasp as far as I am concerned. I can help you with that if you like.

how can you help me i really need help friend

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Nice story. i love this. thanks

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What is your first language? I am asking because in my honest opinion.

This story is grammatically so flawed, i have read over and over, and still failed to understand what it is even about, despite rambling about love.

my first language is Urdu thats why i am weak in english but i am doing my best to post some thing not spam and trying to work hard on it thanks

Okay. That is understandable. With a little more learning and practice, you should improve. Let me know if there is any way i can help. My English is not the best, but it is well enough, i think.

I also see you are only just a bout 4-5 days old. I am glad to welcome you around. Lol. I am not much older myself, but well. At least a couple of days older than you!

Its good to have you around. I am particularly happy because you are also a writer. We can learn from each other.

You are welcome again. happy steeming.

For a moment that first image looked like "The Weekend"
Huge fan here!
Great story and writing skills, I am an avid reader and writer on all things possible, this was enjoyable.
Long Live Kami! Lol

amazing story...

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My reading leads me to the following commnet: it is poorly-written. I can barely squeeze ut any meaning at all from this text. Sentences sometimes need a verb to convey a meaning:

There were. Girl working in the company she was in love with Amir.

Would it be better to publish in your own language? I wonder if that would help or not. Somehow I doubt even that would make this even a little interesting.

Wow. That was a cute one

Very cute pics, love the first one so much!

Nice one here bro! Your stories are always amazing. I love them. Keep going man

" some people have a strange attitude, know??
When you're going to give him seriously, he will give you the importance of the importance!!
When you have a little care of him, he will start to neglect you!!
When you start to love her strongly, why do he know why he will be removed away!!
What a strange thing than he knows??
When you are very disappointed, he will reduce the importance of giving him seriously, stop caring or going away from the truth... that day will be a man who has lost something valuable!!
The problem is, when it comes to the moment, it becomes too much too long!!
The question arises, why people do like this??
The people of this world are different... when he gets something without any effort, it works in his head, that's why I don't know what I do, that's what I do, it's the whole thing. It seems to be free... the importance of people with free things are less!!
The boy who does not have a better result in the exam, can be stuck inside his head, " I don't need to read, I can be able to take it
Suddenly, one day, I feel a little bit of stumble, always take a little effort!!
Yes, people's feelings are selfless... no relationship to give and take care... true words!!
But if you're going to 100 % of your 100 % effort, if you have a 0 % effort and get it, if you have a similar effort... then you must be a good man and extreme. Stupid people!!
Stupid people lose care or love in this war finally lost for his stupidity!!
But there is a privilege of being a fool... you will get too much pain across a specific time... so much more means too much... then you will be strong for the rest of the time... this is the time of the specific time. Day - it depends on your wishes, how fast you can control yourself, it's on that!!
This change is just like a glass wall from glass walls... if you want to be broken before you go to ruin, you will be intact now!!
And that man??
The man who can get everything from you with 0 % effort, it may be like, it's not actually lost or lost anything... but in free, you have to love your care, love has been loved... really What is it??
No... because he will be in his heart... he will not accept everything, he will miss everything... let the fever be in a rainy day, or the sleep in the rainy day... be conscious or subconscious. He will realise, there's a huge mistake!!
He was actually good at a very small time... but he's a great time to do with that little time care and the love of love!!
Some of the person who had a 100 % effort, he just got hurt, he does not have nothing to regret... but the man does not have a very effort, the whole life will have the same time that he will have the whole life!! Maybe a little effort would have been good today!!
At the end of the day, the pain is a temporary, slowly, slowly... but why do you know why the whole life is going to make life in the whole life.

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